In this distressing, edgy account of ‘Touching deep space’ you are offered two scenarios of 2 men in entirely different mind sets as they are faced with hard options. The writer portrays Joe filled with feeling and in extreme pain while Simon accepts truth and thinks logically. The sentence structure of the 2 stories are arranged diversely. In Joe’s story there is usage of brief sentences such as “I’m Dead.”, which portrays how Joe has actually lost all hope and is on the edge of dread.
On the other hand, Simon uses quite prolonged, detailed sentences for his experience such as “I accepted without concern that I might leave the mountain alone” Which represents how he does not appear to appreciate the real dilemma. Unlike Joe, he is caring about the security of himself. He seems to be in more control of the scenario and is picking the fate of Joe but does not point out how he desperately desires to save his ‘pal’.
The writer portrays Joes tone as him being irrational and rather unfavorable towards the situation, “Really much alone” reveals he is distressed and believes pessimistically.
He attempts to think positively, like when he says “maybe I’ve simply ripped something” which shows his determination and will in addition to he doesn’t want to provide in. Simon on the other hand uses a very formal tone as he looks for to just appreciate himself, “I could not assist him” and “He looked Useless” makes Simon appear careless and emotionless, the complete reverse to Joe, something that the author does to make the 2 accounts more distinctive.
Repeating, this is shown throughout the text from Joe and Simon. Joe utilizes repeating when he states “My leg! … My leg!” This reveals the real discomfort that Joe was in and highlights the importance of the problem, the ellipsis is there to show the awareness of what has actually simply taken place or possibly it was just an additional huge breath from Joe. Simon utilizes Repeating when he keeps duplicating “I” which demonstrates how he once again only appreciates himself and looks like a selfish individual. The writer made sure that Joe and Simon used various emotive language, Joe utilized really psychological language while Simon was straight forward. Joe’s character was represented by the author as a pleasant guy who not just appreciates himself.
For example when he was in agony, thought it was all over and was going to die he wasn’t thinking about himself, he was thinking about how Simon would be able to get down. “Simon would be ripped off the mountain” again shows his concern for Simon when his leg was in a “grotesque distortion”. Simon doesn’t use a lot of emotive language because he is represented as emotionless when he says “In a way I hoped he would fall”. The real difference in characters shown by the writer is that Joe says “I’m dead.” and Simon says “You’re Dead…”. In Conclusion, the writer has presented both these aspects of the experience by differing them to the point where they seem to be the opposite of each other, by doing this he has used all sentence structure, tone, repetition and emotive language to create a dual voice text.