In the essay “Organ Sales Will Save Lives” by Joanna MacKay, kidney failure is the main topic. In her thesis, MacKay states that, “Governments should not ban the sale of human organs; they should regulate it (92).” The thesis is supported by one main reason: it will save lives. In America 350,000 people struggle each year from this situation. MacKay also states that with the legal selling of organs, more people will be willing to give up their kidneys. There are also other ways to save lives like dialysis, but this situation would only be for a temporary time period, transplant is definitely the way to go. People in third world countries are extremely willing to sell their kidneys because they need the money (94). MacKay points out that there is a black market for selling kidneys for $150,000 because it is illegal to sell organs in many countries (93). The broker who arranges the sale, takes advantage of uneducated poor people who are in desperate need of money, only paying them around $1,000 for a kidney (93).
People around the world also donate kidneys from the good of their heart; these people have very good moral reasoning’s. She then goes on to talk about the pros and cons of this transplant and how everybody gains except the patient. The workers in the hospitals are paid to do the operation, the person who needs the kidney walks away with one, and the donor is left with nothing. The Government could also regulate this transaction to help make the donors receive money, this way there would be more kidneys up for grab. In her essay Mackay uses statistics and accurate evidence to get through to the readers how she feels about the cause and effect of this operation in modern day. Death is an inescapable factor in life. In the long run it is all expected to come to an end one day, but for some the end doesn’t have to come so soon. In the essay Organ Sales Will Save Lives, Joanna MacKay, states how the legalization of the sale of organs has the ability to save thousands of lives.
You will see that MacKay talks about death often, which is appealing the emotion of fear and how people go around this. This is based on the fact that there are about 350,000 Americans struggling in today’s society who are waiting for an organ transplant. However, due to laws that forbid the sale of organs, many of these people are condemned to death as they wait in the long line for a donor. Besides a donor many turn to Dialysis, an only temporary solution and, as MacKay states, “are shackled to a machine for the rest of their life.” MacKay establishes credibility when she talks about the actual legalization of the organ sales, although MacKay favors the illegal side of kidney trade, it appeals to the audience and she practically begs for it to be legal to benefit many around the world. MacKay gathers great evidence that is very accurate because of the time it was published and it clearly states how serious this renal end stage disease is.
MacKay then carries on to talks about the Government regulations and how they can increase the money the donors will receive from this transaction. As MacKay states, many turn to the black market to get their needed organ paying a vast sum of money and traveling to different countries to be operated on. This desperation to carry out illegal activity is used to reinforce MacKay’s argument that making the sale of organs illegal only worsens the situation. The point is also brought up there is many people, especially poor people, who would sell one of their kidneys for money. MacKay states how it is a low risk operation, and the seller can decide if it is worth the risk. Paying people for giving their kidneys would dramatically increase the number of donors and save many more lives as opposed to waiting for people to donate their organs out of the kindness of their heart and expect nothing in return. MacKay appeals to a person’s logical nature when she states that money rules people, in which it very much so does.
The money that could be gained from legal organ transactions is immense; MacKay states that it is in the ballpark of $25,000. MacKay’s solution would not only legalize the selling of organs, but also make it regulated by the government, eliminating many people’s fears of the possible consequences of legalization. She also argues how it would be easier to control the lawful sale of organs as opposed to the unlawful sale. It does an excellent job at providing the facts to reinforce her point and can easily convince readers to believe why her side is correct.
The only major complaint I have is that the paper is too one sided. It would be interesting to see and opposing side or just a counter to many of her arguments. I realize that is not the point of her essay and she is trying to push us to her side, but I believe that the paper would be more interesting to readers if we had an opposing view on the subject. Other than that minor point her essay is well written and is great at expressing her side of the argument.