Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience that actions need to be taken to stop the addiction to social networking. Thesis Statement: Being too addicted to social networking can cause some serious problems, so it is necessary to stop it. Main Points: ?.Addiction to social networking has caused serious problems. A. Addiction to social networking leads to distraction while working. B. Addiction to social networking makes us feel isolated in real life. C. Addiction to social networking weakens our ability to think. ?.Some factors contributes out addiction to social networking. A. Technology development gives us the chance. B. Psychological need to express ourselves adds to the obsession. ?.Actions need to be taken to stop the addiction to social networking. A. We can download some app to force ourselves to be focused. B. We should arrange our time for efficiently. C. We should engage ourselves in real-life socializing.
(Attention getter) How many of you know what ‘s the picture I showed on the screen?Actually, it’s an APP for Apple and Android users.It was developed to force ourselves to focus on our study, cutting our obsession with our phone.It works very simple but also very rude.At first, you should set a time, such as 20 min, or 1 h, during which, you expect yourself to focus on your study without any connection to you phone. Once you break the law you set yourself, immediately, the app will automatically send a message to renren, to inform everyone that you fail to concentrate and seek contempt and supervision. .(Relevancy statement)
But why we must use the app to force ourselves to get focused? Even at the cost of being abused?Could it be said that there is something making it a really tough job to be attentive to our daily life?Then what is it ? ?.(Credibility) But why we must use the app to force ourselves to get focused? Even at the cost of being abused?Could it be said that there is something making it a really tough job to be attentive to our daily life?Then what is it ? (Thesis statement) So we must stop our addiction to social networking. ?.(Preview of main points) Today we will analyze the harm, cause of social networking and some tips to help us end it.
(Transition) Let’s start with the harm.
(Main Point 1)problems
But was it worth the time we spent?Of course not.Now I will show the three bad consequences resulted from overuse of social network.They are: Distraction while working, Isolated in real life, Weakening in thinking. (Internal Preview) Now I will show the three bad consequences resulted from overuse of social network.They are: Distraction while working, Isolated in real life, Weakening in thinking. A.(Subpoint 1) There is a research sponsored by harmon.ie and executed by uSamp, showed that almost 60% time for distration are wasted exchanging different windows of social network, email, sms, 45% staff can work continually without any interruption for 15 min and 53%staff at least waste 1 hour on social networking. It’s obvious that distraction has killed most of our efficiency. B.(Subpoint 2) Social networking also makes us feeling lonely in real life.
Let’s think about why social networking is developed? What’s its initial aim?In light of the fact that we’re too busy to meet with each other and to involve ourselves in socializing, it gives us chance to communicate through Internet and generally, is aimed at building relationship. But what’s happening now?While get-together, we focus on mobile phones. Then the waiter serves the dishes, we take a photo of the dishes then go on with the phone thing. Some foreigners even ask whether phones in China can test the food is poisonous or not. It may sounds hilarious.Thing really go contrary to our wished. Check the following signals: 1How often do you stay up late for SNS? 2How long do you focus on your phone while real-life socialing? 3Will you be upset without phone? 4Do you often feel I have nothing to say – -?
5Are you anxious when face-to-face talking? If most of your answers is yes, you had better pay attention to whether your connection with social networking is too much. Don’t be the slave of social networking. C.(Subpoint 3)Do you know the man in the picture?He’s mark bauerlein. He wrote a book called the dumbest generation. In his book, he indicates that digital era is making the young the dumbest generation Nowadays, young people are too engaged in tools for entertainment, such as social networking, mobile phone, and so on. Technology does a vitally supportive job. What do we usually do in SNS? Girls tend to upload their photos, which are carefully elected, to gain respect or admiration or something. short messages are common too. It can show how some one feels instantly. Another function is share. Whatever catches your eyes or whatever you are for, click share, then anyone is informed.
(Transition)But what indeed contribute to its burgeoning?
(Main Point 2) causes
A. (Subpoint 1) Technology development
Firstly, nowadays almost every one brings with himself a cell phone, and there is wifi everywhere like in cafe, classroom, bus stop and airports. It gives us the chance. B.(Subpoint 2) Psychological need What do we mostly post on social networking? Photos, short messages. The phenomena implies the need to express ourselves. Also we tend to choose to be defined by others, which results from the lack of self-confidence.
(Transition) Given the situation above, people are now working on the solution.
(Main Point 3) There are some tips.
A.(Subpoint 1) we can appeal to outside forces.
B.(Subpoint 2) we should be a good timer.
C.(Subpoint 3) we should engage ourselves in real-life socializing.
(Review of main points) On the whole , it is high time that we recognized the significance of ending our attraction to social networking. So As a result, we should take some effective methods to solve the problem. ?.(Closing remarks) So keep away from your phones or laptops and reach the real-life friends. Thank you!
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